Just published my website and looking for feedback, please

Leslie Diaz

Hi, All! I just published my website and I'm hoping I can get some people to go to it and give me some feedback on it.
Thanks in advance!
http://www.mbsquaredaway.com

Cynthia Murray

Hi @Leslie Diaz , great job on your website! It looks very professional, clean, and inviting. Just a couple layout things I noticed...

HOMEPAGE:
"A place for everything and everything in it's place"...the apostrophe isn't needed on its.

The section that ends in "maybe having time for yoga"...I'd adjust the wrap around with the text to balance out each line. The bottom line should have at least 5 words or more so it looks more balanced.

SERVICES:
The apostrophe on Pantries isn't needed.

BEFORE/AFTER:
Instead of saying these spaces were organizing using nothing but what the college students had, I'd take that part off since you'll be adding more before and afters. You can say something like "Some of these clients opted to reuse organizing bins and supplies that they already had, while others opted for new organizing supplies to maximize the space".

Before and After photos - it'd be nice if they photos had less space between then so you can really see the before and after comparison.

I'd make the layout the same on the whole page. At the bottom it shows simple spaces, but layout could be better. The top 4 photos would look more full if there was one more vertical photo in it and it brought it to line up on the right with the pics underneath it.

"Examples of simple but squared away spaces"...there should be a few spaces above and below this text. You could also change it to read "Simple Squared Away Spaces" and center and enlarge the text.

Leslie Diaz

Thank you so much for the feedback, Cynthia!

Leslie Diaz

I felt the same way about the photos, but unfortunately, when I try to get them to be closer together it just won’t do it. I’ve tried several different things to try to make it work, maybe the way I took the original photos is what is not allowing for what I want.

Cynthia Murray

You're welcome! Yeah, I guess the templates too might have settings that make it hard to do exactly what you want.